Thursday, April 20, 2017

English Email Writing Tips from a Korean-American

ITTY-BITTY GRAMMAR
DEFINITE & INDEFINITE ARTICLES (“the,” “a,” & “an”)
Working Definitions
·         Definite articles: “the” (a word used before a singular or plural noun to indicate specificity)
·         Indefinite articles: “a” or “an” (a word before a singular noun to indicate a general reference)

Using the definite article
·         Proper nouns: For nouns that refer to a unique person, place, or thing (only one exists in the world), use “the” to demonstrate this quality. (In English, proper nouns are typically capitalized)
§  I visited the Blue House in April; while I was there, I learned a lot about US-Korea relations.
o   NOTE: “The” is typically not used when referring to the name of an organization, company or group.
§  Amnesty International is an international organization that fights for human rights.
§  I am interning for KEMS-TV this summer—they are producing a documentary about Korean street food.
·         Specific nouns: For nouns that refer to one particular person, place or thing among a large group, use “the” to emphasize that you are referring to one specific entity.
§  During the lecture, the American history professor walked back and forth, waving his arms dramatically. (Although there are many American history professors in the world, the writer refers to one of them specifically, likely his own professor.)
§  To receive an A in the class, I need to try harder on my in-class essays and exams for the rest of the semester. (This sentence is specific to the particular class that the writer mentions.)
o   In this context, “the” is often used to emphasize a noun that your reader already knows about or to indicate that you are referring to a noun that was previously-mentioned.
§  The dinner party will take place in front of the school cafeteria. I can come by at 10:00am and help set up the food area. (By using “the” in the second sentence, the writer indicates that he is talking about the eating place he mentioned in the first sentence. There is a “the” in front of “school cafeteria,” because the writer refers to a specific cafeteria that both he and the reader know about.)
o   NOTE: When referencing the name of a person, do not include the article.
§  During the lecture, Professor Alan walked back and forth, waving his arms dramatically.
§  Today’s lecture focused on King Gwanggaeto the Great, one of the most renowned rulers of the Goguryeo Dynasty.

Using the indefinite article
·         “a” vs. “an”
o   For nouns that begin with a vowel (a, e, i, o, u) and are written with the indefinite article, use “an” instead of “a” to introduce the word.
§  An apple, an Android phone, an emergency call
o   When pronouncing a word, this makes it much easier to distinguish between the article and the actual noun.
§  NOTE: If the word begins with “eu” (European, eulogy) or the letter “u,” pronounced as “you” (universe, unicorn), use the indefinite article “a”
·         General nouns: For singular nouns that refer to a general person, place, or thing, use “a” instead of “the.”
o   We are making a documentary about a Korean-American who raises awareness about his native country in the US. (There are many Korea-Americans who potentially fit this description. Also, the writer’s goal is to discuss the documentary and its subject generally, without revealing specific details.)
o   I work as an English translator at my school every Saturday. (The writer identifies himself as one of the many English translators in the world member. The writer may also be implying that there is more than one English translator at the school.)
o   I can come by at 10:00am and help find a present for our teacher. (The writer uses the general article “a” to show that he hasn’t found a present yet, so he can’t refer to a specific one.)

Using no article
·         Abstract nouns: For abstract nouns that don’t refer to a physical subject, don’t use an article. Abstract nouns include school subjects, sports, holidays, and emotions.
o   You should come watch the taekwondo competition that’s taking place this weekend. I am very passionate about practicing [X] taekwondo.
o   The college freshman shows great enthusiasm for [X] Mock Trial; he has been s a member of the school Mock Trial team for 3 years. (Mock Trial, as an abstract activity, does not have a definite article. “The school Mock Trial team,” however, refers to a very specific group and does require a definite article.)
·         Plural general nouns: Some plural nouns that refer to general people, places, or things can be written with either “the” or no article.
o   Please join us to participate in [the] camp activities and [the] games throughout the week; all members of the family are invited (The sentence is correct with a definite article or no article before “camp activities” and “games.” By stating “the family,” the writer refers specifically to the readers’ families.)
·         Countries: For references to most country names, do not use an article.
§  The convention will take place in [X] Canada next month.
o   “The Philippines” is an exception to this rule, as it always requires a definite article
§  I hope to visit the Philippines this summer to explore the Filipino culture.
o   NOTE: Country names that include the words “Republic,” “United” or “Union,” “Federation,” “Empire,” “Islands,” “State” require the use of a definite article.
§  In history class, we learned that the Russian Federation emerged as the strongest country after the fall of the Soviet Union.
o   NOTE: When referring to the people of a country or describe some aspect of the country, use the general rules regarding definite and indefinite articles.
§  The British queen visited a Korean restaurant in London while I was touring the city.
§  It is a well-known fact that the Chinese invented paper and printing technology.
·         Time expressions: While the time of day, decades and centuries always require the definite article, do not use an article when referencing days of the week, months, or the year.
o   I can’t believe it’s already [x] August!
o   Can you come over on [x] Tuesday, in the afternoon?
o   When President Reagan declared that “it’s morning in America” in the mid-1980s, he became one of the most popular American presidents of the 20th century.
o   NOTE: The seasons can be written with or without the definite article. When referring to a very specific month in time, however, the definite article is required.
§  [The] Spring is normally a beautiful and relaxing time of year. However, in the spring of 2018, I will be waiting nervously for acceptance letters from colleges.
o   NOTE: When referring to a specific day of the week, with a number or the words “first” or “last,” the definite article is required.
§   My new phone will arrive by mail on the second Friday of the month, while my new phone case will arrive by the last Friday.

Sample Email #1
Hello,

My name is Carole Kim, and I am
a junior (Since the writer is one of many such students, it is best to use the indefinite article.) at the Saint Francis High School. (Names of organizations and schools do not require the definite article.) I am the captain of the school Model UN team, (There is only one captain and MUN team at the school.) and I have been competing at the conferences since my freshman year with accolades. (The writer speaks generally about “conferences” without intending to reference specific ones.) Below is the link to my resume.

For references, please contact Mr. Dillon Reese, the MUN club moderator at my school.

I am interested in advancing my skill in
the MUN, (Don’t use a definite article for references to activities.) meeting and learning from other experienced delegates, and attending more high-level conferences, and I see the Innovative Students Program as an incredible opportunity to reach this goal. (The compound word “high-level” requires a hyphen.)

I understand that
the Innovative Students Program academic year begins in the* fall, but I would like to join the program this spring. (The program itself is unique and requires the definite article.) Please let me know if this would be possible.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Best,
Carole Kim

*Remember, the definite article before seasons is optional.

SUBJECT-VERB AGREEMENT
Working Definitions
·         Singular subject-verb combos: If the main subject of a sentence is singular, the main verb should be singular.
o   She enjoys a bag of pretzels before lunch every day.
·         Plural subject-verb combos: If the main subject of a sentence is plural, the main verb should be plural.
o   The brother and sister laugh obnoxiously in every movie, causing great inconvenience to fellow movie goers. On the other hand, their cousin laughs only when it is appropriate.
o   Until the clock strikes midnight, we study diligently in the silent library. My cousin studies in her room.
o   NOTE: In the simple past and future tenses, both singular and plural verbs have the same form.
§  I wrote to the principal to request a less stringent dress code. On the same day, the school directors wrote to the principal to demand harsher punishments for breaking the dress code.
§  When we receive a confirmation from the principal, we will contact you again with more details regarding the event.
Subject-verb agreement exceptions
·         Progressive verb tenses: When describing a past or future action that was or will be in the process of taking place (last verb ends in –ing), match the correct form of the root word “to be” to the number of the noun.
o   Yesterday, I was writing to the principal to request a less stringent dress code. Coincidentally, the school directors were writing to the principal to demand harsher punishments for breaking the dress code
o   Because the school office closes at 5 pm on Fridays, I was unable to turn in my course registration sheet. On the other hand, my friends were able to submit their forms as they visited the office earlier in the day.
·         Or/nor situations: When multiple subjects are linked together with “or” or “nor,” the verb form should match the number of the noun closest to the verb.
o   By the end of the school year, neither the teacher nor her students were interested in learning more course content.
o   Either the parents or a guardian needs to attend the graduation ceremony.
·         First-person exceptions: When the subject of a sentence in the present tense is “I,” use the plural form of the corresponding verb.
o   I write for the school newspaper every week about food, entertainment, and pop culture.
·         Doesn’t vs don’t: Doesn’t, the shortened form of “does not,” is used for singular nouns. On the other hand, don’t, the shortened form of “do not,” is used for plural nouns, first person expressions, or direct commands.
o   The old man doesn’t know how to print out an Excel file from her laptop. (NOTE: In daily conversation, “old man” is not normally used to refer to the elderly.)
o   Don’t open the special package until you receive person from your parents. (In direct commands, the subject “you,” is implied.)
o   My friends and I decided to attend a tech convention hosted by Apple, although I don’t own any Apple products.
o   After moving to a boarding school in the East Coast, the troublesome students don’t smoke or use drugs.
o   NOTE: The past tense form of both “doesn’t” and “don’t” is “didn’t.”
·         Collective/group nouns: For sentences with the following indefinite pronouns, use the singular form of the corresponding verb.
Each
Each one
Either
Neither
Everyone
Everybody
Anybody
Anyone
Nobody
Somebody
Someone
No one

o   Is everyone prepared to take the exam tomorrow? (In question form, the main verb goes in front of the corresponding subject.)
o   Each student needs to write a letter to his or her local political representative as part of the homework assignment. (The indefinite pronoun in the subject should be treated as a singular noun throughout the sentence. The phrase “his or her,” is a common way to reference the possession of a singular subject.)
·         Special singular nouns: Conceptual nouns that refer to a non-physical subject and end in –s (diseases, fields of study, games) are singular subjects, and require the use of the singular verb form.
o   Through my science research project, I learned that measles is a deadly disease.
o   Many of my classmates have told me that economics is a much more difficult field than politics.
o   NOTE: Verbs that refer to an action taken by a group of people collectively, as a single unit, also require the singular verb form. If you are referencing the actions of a few members of the group, or actions that occur amongst members of the group, use the plural verb form.
§  The debate team competes at college-level tournaments at least 5 times a year. However, members of the debate team often fight over which local conferences to attend.
§  NOTE: The noun phrase, “the police,” is an exception, as it is always plural.
·         “The police have penetrated the robbers’ hideout!” the reporter shouted over the din of the wailing police sirens.
·         Special plural nouns: For nouns that are made up of paired items, such as scissors, pants, and glasses, use the plural verb form. However, if you attach “the pair of” in front of the paired noun, use the singular verb form.
o   Did you find my scissors? They are probably hidden behind the cupboard in the back of the classroom. That particular pair of scissors has not been seen in many years.

VERB TENSES & TRICKY USAGES
Gerunds and past participles
Working definitions
·         Gerunds: Verbs ending in -ing that indicate an action in progress
o   Gerunds can also be used to refer to a general action as a noun. (Running is an exhaustive activity. My favorite thing to do is learning foreign languages.)
·         Past participles: Verbs typically ending in -ed used in compound past tense constructions with the verbs “had,” “has,” “have,” or “will have”
§  The ambitious student had tried to earn an “A” in the class.
§  I will have turned 18 by November, making me eligible to vote in the 2016 election.
o   NOTE: For regular verbs, the spelling of the past participle form is the same as the spelling of the regular past tense form.
§  I finished and submitted my book report by email, five minutes after the deadline. I would have submitted it earlier, but I wanted to revise my work one more time.
o   The past participle verb form has many exceptions. Check the chart below for some common irregular cases.
Irregular Verb
Past participle
Begin
Begun
Break
Broken
Drive
Driven
Choose
Chosen
Do
Done
Write
Written
Buy
Bought
Catch
Caught
Get
Got
Leave
Left
Find
Found
Come
Come



·         Both –ing verbs and -ed past participles can be used to describe nouns or pronouns.
o   The museum, established in honor of America’s founding fathers, holds an elaborate celebration on July 4th every year. (The clause inside the commas, beginning with the past participle “established,” provides background information about the main subject—the museum. Note that this description provides details about the museum from the past.)
o   Flipping open her laptop, the determined student began to type her English essay furiously. (The clause starting with “flipping” describes the subject—the determined student—or provides background info about what she is currently doing. Note that this description provides a sense of progress, as if the action is happening right now.)
·         Keep in mind that descriptive clauses that start with and –ing or –ed verb need to be placed as close as possible to the noun they are describing.
o   The college student sprinted down the sidewalk with her energetic puppy, flicking droplets of sweat from her forehead. (The reader cannot know if the clause “flicking droplets…” refers to the college student or the energetic puppy. Place this clause immediately after or before the noun “the college student,” in order to clarify the meaning.)
o   The college student, flicking droplets of sweat from her forehead, sprinted down the sidewalk with her energetic puppy.

Infinitive verbs
 Working definition
·         A verb in the form “to be” that can serve as either a noun or descriptive phrase
o   Like gerunds, infinitives can also be used to refer to a general action as a noun. However, when starting a sentence with a general action as the main subject, it is more common to use the gerund form.
§  She wants to study abroad in London as soon as she enters college. (What she wants –a noun—is to study abroad.)
§  Travelling to a foreign country so soon after transitioning to a new school is not recommended.

Special Verb Groups
May vs. might
·         When talking about the probability of a scenario, use “may” to demonstrate that the situation is likely to take place and use “might” to imply that it is possible, but less likely.
o   I may attend the party tomorrow night, so long as I finish all of my homework in the afternoon. (The writer believes that he/she is likely to attend the party, as long as the following condition is fulfilled.)
o   I absolutely detest sleeping outdoors, but you might be able to convince me to go camping with you for one weekend. (The writer implies that there is little to no possibility that she will be convinced to go on the trip.)
o   The proud parents of the class valedictorian might not be present for their son’s commencement address at the graduation ceremony.  (The writer believes that there is a slight possibility of the above situation taking place.)
·         When requesting or granting permission, “may” is a more direct statement, while “might” implies a sense of uncertainty.
o   May I bring my cellphone into the classroom during the week of final exams? (The writer directly and respectfully requests permission from a figure of authority)
o   Might I propose a small change to the layout created by the editor-in-chief? (The writer is even more respectful to the figure of authority or the established situation and recognizes that it is likely his request will not be accepted.)
§  NOTE: Daily emails and interactions in American society do not require the same level of obedience nor follow the same hierarchy that is found in Korean society. It is perfectly acceptable to make requests to one’s teacher or boss with the “may” construction.

Could vs. would vs. can
·         When asking polite questions or making requests, use “can” to ask permission to do or say something. Use “can” or “could” to make polite suggestions or ask a question.
§  Can we drive your car to Los Angeles over the weekend?
§  Could you/ can you share the google doc file with me?
o   NOTE: Although it is common to use both “may” and “can” when asking for permission to do or say something, in formal situations, it is more appropriate to use “may.” When speaking informally to friends or family, it is perfectly acceptable to use “can” for this purpose.
o   “Would” is also used in specific cases, to ask a polite question. It is appropriate to pose a question with the word “would” to friends, parents, and other figures of authority. Check the chart below for phrases that specifically use the word “would.”
Would it be okay /alright
(this phrase is always followed by an infinitive verb)
to begin volunteering with the organization next week?
(The writer or the asker is the implied subject that would carry out the main action. In order to ask permission for someone else, include the phrase “for + [subject]” in front of the infinitive verb.)
E.g. Would it be okay for my brother to begin volunteering next week?
Would you mind…?
(this phrase is followed either by a gerund [-ing] or an “if” phrase)
staying until evening to watch my concert?
(With the “would you mind [gerund]” construction, the audience (you) is the implied subject. In order to ask permission for someone else, include the possessive form of the subject in front of the verb.)
E.g. Would you mind my staying until the evening?
if I spent the day with my family?
(With the “would you mind if” construction, use the past tense form of the verb, even when asking for permission for a present or future event.)
§  NOTE: In response to a “Would you mind…” question, say “no” in order to grant permission or approve a request (I would not mind, it would not bother me) and “yes” to refuse or oppose. (Refer to the “Questions (yes or no)” section for more info.)
·         When expressing a present or future ability to do or say something, use “can.”
o   If I am occupied when you arrive, my research partner can give you a tour of the lab. (In this sentence, “if” indicates a potential situation, and “can” indicates the research partner’s future ability in response to this scenario.)
o   I can type at 100 wpm. (This sentence expresses the writer’s current ability.)
·         When expressing a past ability or something that was possible in the past, use “could.”
o   When I was training for the taekwondo championships, I could run a 5K in under twenty minutes. (The writer had the ability expressed in the second clause in a past time, as specified by the first clause.)
o   My sister could have been the valedictorian of her middle school class if I had helped her more often with her homework. (The scenario expressed in the first clause would have been possible in the past had the condition in the second clause been fulfilled.)
·         When discussing a highly likely event that hasn’t happen, didn’t happen or is unlikely to happen, use “would.”
o   My boss would have been pleased to see me working so hard, even during Christmas break. (The writer is certain that the first clause would have been achieved if the second clause had been fulfilled.)
o   My sister would have been the valedictorian of her middle school class if I had helped her more often with her homework. (Both “could” and “would” can be used in this context, but “would” implies a greater sense of certainty that this outcome, which was not carried through, would have taken place.)
§  NOTE: While “could” and “would” can be used for similar purposes, “would” suggests greater certainty, as it emphasizes that the scenario would definitely have taken place if a condition had been met.
o   To express unquestionably and objectively that an outcome is going to take place or to demonstrate that you are certain that something is true, use “will” in place of “would.”
§  It will be hard to run the classes with irregular attendance.
o   NOTE: Although “may” and “can,” are often mixed up, keep in mind that “may” implies that one is granting or receiving permission to carry out an action. “Can” implies one’s ability to carry out the action, based on external factors or internal capabilities.
§  You may teach or learn foreign language with your pen pal. (This sentence would make perfect sense in an instruction manual or list of instructions provided by a teacher.)
§  You can teach or learn foreign language with your pen pal. (In order to suggest potential activities that the reader could do or to remind him of activities that he is capable of doing, use “can.”)

Prepositions
Working definition
·         Preposition: a word that describes the direction, position, time, or intention of the main subject
o   Check the chart below for some common prepositions used in everyday writing
About
After
Below
Beyond
Concerning
Except
For
From
Instead of
Of
Outside
Over
Regarding
To
With

·         Prepositional Idioms: phrases that require a specific preposition, based on the context of the sentence
o   My aunt is participating in a teacher appreciation event at my school. (The word “participating” must be written with the preposition “in” and not any other word.)
Common idiomatic expressions
·         Check the chart below for some common expressions that are always written with the preposition shown on the right side of the chart (or without any prepositions, in some cases).
Common error
Correct sentence
My team organized the first North Korean refugee awareness day in my school.
My team organized the first North Korean refugee awareness day at my school, in the gym. (To describe the location of an event, use “at”. To specify a specific place within this location, use “in”.)
I am currently a high school junior, so I will consider to attend the college-level course next year.
I am currently a high school junior, so I will consider attending the college-level course next year. (When describing what one is considering, “consider” should be followed by a gerund.)
My parents and I have discussed about the logistics of the summer English program.
My parents and I have discussed [x] the logistics of the summer English program.
I will email to someone.
I will email him/her. OR I will send an email to him/her.
She was so pleased to learn about your enthusiasm about learning Korean. OR She was so pleased to learn about your enthusiasm to learn Korean.
She was so pleased to learn about your enthusiasm for learning  Korean
Please fill in the form. Remember to fill out all the blanks before turning in the paper.
Please fill out the form. Remember to fill in all the blanks before turning in the paper. (You can fill “out” an entire form, waiver, or packet, but you can only fill “in” individual blanks, spaces, or lines on the form.)
It seems like a great summer camp and fits for my interest very well.
It seems like a great summer camp and fits [x] my interest very well.
Have you spoken to any foreigners who have interests about Korea?
Have you spoken to any foreigners who have interest in Korea? OR Have you spoken to any foreigners who are interested in Korea?
My brother has a passion to contribute to biomedical research projects.
My brother has a passion for contributing to biomedical research projects.
I am not sure about the possibility to form a group to attend the program.
I am not sure about the possibility of forming a group to attend the program.
This is a friendly reminder for the registration process.
This is a friendly reminder about the registration process. OR This is a friendly reminder for all parents that registration closes today. (If the word “reminder” is followed by the person for whom it is intended, use “for”. To describe what information is contained in the reminder, use “about.”)
We decided that it would be best for him to rest during the rest of the week.
We decided that it would be best for him to rest for the rest of the week.
I am so sorry not to reply to you about our winter vacation plans.
I am so sorry for not replying to you about our winter vacation plans.
I will wait your response.
I will wait for your response.
I will be out of office next week and will resume to work on Monday.
I will be out of office next week and will resume working on Monday. OR I will be out of office next week and will return to work on Monday

·         NOTE: The gerund verb form cannot be used with the preposition “to” (Recall the discussion of infinitive verbs in the previous section.)

Sample Email #2
Hello James,

This is Rosalie from the LAKS admin team. Thank you for your inquiry. We are so pleased to know hear about* (When the word “hear” is followed by a description of what you heard, make sure to include the preposition “about.”) your enthusiasm about for learning Korean. (“Enthusiasm for” is a common idiom.)

We have discussed about the logistics of the summer youth program. (“Discussed about” is an incorrect idiom.) To run the class, we will need to have at least four registered students. We considered your suggestion to include the students (This is a general reference to such students, so no article is necessary) who can participate in only part of the session (“Participate in” is a common idiom). However, Iit would will** be hard to run the classes with irregular attendance. (The transition word makes the flow between the two sentences much smoother)

If you would like to attend the classes, please sign up by June 1st. If there are not enough registrants, we will let you know as soon as possible. (Notice that the writer doesn’t refer to “classes” in general, but the specific “classes” that were discussed in the previous paragraph.) The admin team is more than happy to assist you in finding a spot in the fall programs.

Thank you in advance for your understanding. If you have any further*** questions, please feel free to contact us.

Warmly,

*“Know about” is more often used with facts or information that the writer has known for a long time. (I know that you are a skilled orator.) “Hear about” or “heard about” indicates information that the writer recently received from an outside source.
**While “would” is grammatically correct in this sentence, “will” conveys a greater sense of certainty that is often necessary in business emails.
***In the closing remarks, the word “further” implies that the email recipient has already asked a question. Write the sentence without the word “further” if this is the first time you are contacting someone.

SENTENCE STRUCTURE/ FORM

Transitional Words
Working definition
·         words that transition between ideas, sentences, paragraphs, or topics smoothly and coherently
Common errors
·         “so”: The word “so” can be used at either the beginning or middle of the sentence to express a cause-and-effect between two clauses. You should be able to replace “so” with “therefore” without changing the meaning of the sentence. Remember to place either a comma or period before “so” to distinguish between clauses.
o   It snowed heavily for an entire week, so I spent the weekend with my family at a ski resort.
o   I graduated from a very good high school that specializes in math and science. So I decided to study statistics and calculus in college.
§  NOTE: Do not place a comma after “so” when it is used to connect two different sentences or parts of the sentence. A comma is written after the transitional “so” only if it is part of a short phrase that interrupts the sentence flow.
·         The professor informed me that the dean of students wanted to see me immediately, so, alarmed at the urgency of the call, I hurried off to the dean’s office.
o   The technician advised that we shut the windows and doors tightly at night so that no cold air comes into the house. (The phrase “so that” demonstrates the purpose or provides explanation for an action. When writing “so that”, do not use commas to set off the phrase.)
o   Because I was writing so fast, it is possible that my handwriting will be too messy to read. If so, please let me know immediately, and I will send a typed copy of the manuscript to you right away. (The phrase “if so” expresses a conditional statement and can be replaced by the phrase “if that is the case.” Use “if so,” followed by a comma, if you want to introduce a condition or action that only applies if the situation you mentioned in the previous clause is true.)
·         “but”: The word “but” can be used at the beginning or middle of a sentence to introduce a contrasting or contradictory clause to an idea discussed in the previous sentence or part of the sentence. Similar to a “so” statement, do not place any punctuation marks after “but.”
o   My boss requested that I travel with him to Australia for the winter holiday, but I would prefer to stay at home.
o   The class brought treats to school to celebrate their teacher’s 50th birthday. But all of the ice cream melted before the teacher arrived.
·         “and”: The word “and” can be used to link different clauses together as a continuation of a previously-expressed thought. Similar to a “so” statement, do not place any punctuation marks after the “and.”
o   NOTE: Both “and” and “but” can be used in the middle of a sentence to connect two phrases. In this case, remember not to use any commas before or after the word.
§  My dream is to major in business administration and English literature.
§  The first-grader appeared delighted but slightly nervous as he sank his teeth into the ultra-spicy burrito.
o   NOTE: When using “and”, “but”, or “so” at the beginning of a sentence, make sure that the clause that follows expresses a full thought.
Incorrect sentence
Correction #1
Correction #2
My friend is one of the kindest people I know. And one of the smartest. (Here, “one of the smartest” is not a complete thought as there is no subject.)
My friend is one of the kindest people I know and one of the smartest.
My friend is one of the kindest people I know. And she is one of the smartest.

Other ways to transition effectively
·         When transitioning into the next idea, it is not always necessary to insert a transition word such as “so”, “and”, or “but” at the beginning of a sentence. Excessive use of transition words can lead to clunky sentences and distract the reader from the intended meaning of a statement. You can transition effectively between sentences with the following strategies.
o   Repeat a key word or phrase in the previous sentence in the context of the next sentence or a new idea.
§  I am deeply sorry for being unable to turn in my final report on time. Due to my participation in the student leadership conference, I did not feel that I had enough time to edit and revise the essay. (The writer is able to connect his apology with his explanation, while also hinting that he had not received enough time to fulfill the task.)
o   Use the definite article (“the”) or pronouns to indicate to your reader that you are referring back to a previously-mentioned noun.
§  When I was younger, my college-age uncle often walked with me in the park. He would answer all of my questions about how the human brain functions and why the sky was blue.
§  There is a flashing light at the bottom of my computer monitor that I cannot turn off. I would greatly appreciate if you could explain how to turn off the button.
§  NOTE: When using “he” or “she” to allude to a previously-mentioned noun, be careful to distinguish which noun you are referring to.
·         The clown presented me, my two sisters, and my best friend with red balloons. Upon receiving the surprise, she leaped around the room with glee. (In this case, it would be better to refer to the individual by name, as it is impossible to tell whether the leaping person is one of the writer’s sisters or her friend.)
o   Replace a repeated phrase with a demonstrative noun or adjective (this, that, these, those) in order to make your sentences smoother and easier to read.
§  The first business proposal presented at the convention left a very strong impression on the judging panel. One expert later hinted that this proposal was the most promising one of the entire conference.
o   Use phrases that indicate continuity. (still, yet, equally important, again, while)
§  “You don’t have to talk across me, mother. My brain isn’t paralyzed, yet.” (from the movie, Me Before You)
§  When it was first established, the university was committed to providing free education to every qualified applicant. The school still strives to fulfill its founding goal.
o   Incorporate less obvious transition words in the body of the sentence. (despite, even though, even, rather, whereas, unlike, in spite of, together with, likewise)
§  The career diplomat courageously agreed to work in a war-ravaged country, despite the lack of basic services and potential danger.

English Written Expressions
Active vs. passive voice
Working Definitions
·         Active voice: a statement in which the subject is doing the main action
o   When my family and I visited the US for the first time, we took many photos at monuments such as the Lincoln Memorial and Statue of Liberty. (“We”—the main subjects—are “[taking] many photos”—the main action.)
·         Passive voice: a statement in which the subject is not doing the main action ([form of the verb “to be”] + past participle)
o   When my family and I visited the US for the first time, many photos were taken at monuments such as the Lincoln Memorial and Statue of Liberty. (“Many photos—the main subject—are being “taken”—the main action—by an unnamed person. Notice that the passive verb, “were taken,” contains one form of the verb “to be.”)
o   Check the chart below for all the forms of the verb “to be” used in the passive voice.
Be
Being
Been
Am
Is
Are

Was
Were

·         The active voice is more frequently used in English writing (and email writing), as it eliminates some of the repetition and clunky language in the passive voice.
o   The registration forms were created by the school principal, and day-to-day operations are overseen by the vice-principal. -> The school principal created the registration forms, and the vice-principal oversaw day-to-day operations. (The second sentence in the active voice is shorter, smoother, and easier to understand.)
o   Immediately after completing their last final exam, the high school juniors grabbed their backpacks, raced out of the classroom, and hopped into their cars, eager to begin their summer. (The active voice conveys a sense of action and energy that the stiff passive voice lacks.)
·         The passive voice is sometimes substituted for the active voice in order to de-emphasize or minimize the role of the subject, or to discuss a situation objectively.
o   Professor, my homework was taken from my desk! (The writer, likely a student, uses the passive voice to suggest that he or she was not the one that caused this situation. Thus, the writer implies that he is not responsible for not having the homework.)
o   The coating on the glass beakers was removed with an alcohol swab. (In scientific reports, the passive voice is frequently used to maintain a sense of objectivity.)
o   On January 5, 2016, the unarmed defendant was assailed by the plaintiff in a dark alley. (In legal writing or court case arguments, the passive voice is frequently used to demonstrate that one party was not actively involved in an illegal activity, but was instead a “passive” victim.)

Modifier errors
Working definition
·         Modifier: a phrase that “modifies” or describes an element of the sentence, but is not absolutely necessary to the sentence structure
o   Why do you, an enthusiastic and capable college student, want to work here, a small start-up company with very little pay? (The basic sentence makes sense even without the modifying phrases. “An enthusiastic and capable college student” provides extra details about the noun “you,” while “a small start-up company…” provides details about the noun “here.”)
o   NOTE: Modifying phrases that are two or more words long are normally separated from the rest of the sentence with commas or long em dashes (—)

·         Modifying phrases need to be placed as close as possible to the word or group of words that they are describing to avoid confusion.
o   Hoping to receive an internship at the top engineering firm, the interview went very well for the new graduate. (The modifying phrase “hoping…firm” is placed right before “the interview,” making it seem that “the interview” is feeling this sentiment. A corrected sentence would read: The interview went very well for the new graduate, who was hoping to receive an internship at the top engineering firm.)
·         NOTE: Pay special attention to the placement of adverbs (descriptive words that typically end in –ly, or only, just, almost, nearly, merely), for it can change the intended meaning of a sentence.
My family ONLY donates $5 each week to support the church’s fund for disabled students. (emphasizes the monetary nature of the family’s contribution)
My family donates ONLY $5 each week to support the church’s fund for disabled students. (emphasizes the exact amount that the family donates)
My family donates $5 each week to support ONLY the church’s fund for disabled students. (emphasizes the exact purpose that the family donates to)

Confusing verbs of speech (What’s the difference?)
Working definitions
·         Say: to express an opinion or fact
·         Speak: to say words in order to express thoughts, feelings, opinions to someone
·         Talk: to have a conversation about something
·         Tell: to say words to someone or give information by speaking or writing

Despite being very similar in meaning, the four words are used in very different contexts.

Usage
Examples
Say (said)
·         Refers generally to what is being expressed, was previously expressed, or will be expressed by a person
·         Can also refer to specific units of expression (to say “a word”, “name,” “sentence”, or “phrase”)
·         Most commonly used without an indirect object (who you are saying something to, the audience)
·         After a two hour delay, the flight attendant said (that) the plane would be departing in 20 minutes. (When specifying what is being said, it is optional to include the word “that”.)
·         The well-mannered girl said a bad word innocently and cheerfully, unaware of its meaning.
·         If I were president of the US, I would say to the people of this country that Americans need to care more about the events happening outside their borders. (In order to reference the audience in a statement with “say”, use the word “to” immediately after the verb.)
Speak (spoke)
·         Refers to more formal conversations and one-way communication
·         Refers to one’s knowledge of a language
·         Yes, I will speak in front of the school at the all-school assembly. (NOTE: “To speak” can often be replaced by “to deliver a speech,” as both imply that one person is doing almost all of the talking.
·         As requested, I will drop by the office to speak with the principal tomorrow. The president will speak to the White House staff tonight in honor of the President’s day holiday. (The audience can be introduced in a “speak” statement with the word “with” or “to”. “With” implies more of a two-way interaction, while “to” retains the sense of a one-sided speech.
·         My international relations professor spoke French, Italian, Korean, and Vietnamese.
Talk (talked)
·         Refers to more casual, informal conversation
·         Voters love the candidate, as he talks with constituents sincerely and compassionately, unlike the rest of the candidate pool. (Similar to the rules for a “speak” statement, “talk” should be followed by “with” or “to” in order to introduce the audience.)
Tell (told)
·         Can be replaced with “instruct” or “inform” (a speaker “instructs” or “informs” the listener)
·         Most commonly followed by an indirect object (without the word “to”) and a direct object
When the purpose is to instruct: “to tell” + [listener] + [infinitive verb form]
·         My mother tells me to take out the trash every week.
When the purpose is to inform: “to tell” + [listener] + “that” + [a fact]
·         I was told that the most fashionable stationery could be found in Korea.
Confusing verbs of desire and anticipation
Working definitions
·         Want: to long for or need a certain person, thing, or situation
o   NOTE: “Wish” is a less forceful form of the verb “want” and can be used in more formal contexts.
·         Hope: to desire that a particular action will take place
·         Expect: to believe that a certain situation is going to take place

Common expressions with “want”, “wish”, “hope”, “expect”
·         We wish you and your family a wonderful holiday season. (The word “wish” is used with the situation, “a wonderful holiday season”.)
·         I hope you have a restful weekend. (The word “hope” is used with the action, “hav[ing] a restful weekend.)
o   NOTE: At the end of an email, it is acceptable to write “Hope you have [a great weekend]!” or “Hope you enjoy [your vacation]!” without including the main subject “I” at the beginning of the sentence. However, for expressions that start with “wish,” the subject must be included at the start of the sentence, such as in the above example.
·         I want you to send me the quarterly report before the end of the week. (“Want” is most commonly used by a senior or someone of a higher rank speaking to someone of a lower rank, due to its direct, commanding nature.)
·         The teacher expects his students to submit their take-home exams by the end of the month. (In this example, “expects” can be replaced by “wants” without changing the general meaning of the sentence. However, “expects” is slightly stronger, because it implies that the teacher not only needs a certain outcome to occur (“wants”) but also believes that his desire is going to be fulfilled (“expects”).
·         I expect to be finished with my book report in two days. (Both “expect” and “want” are immediately followed by an infinitive verb.)

Sample Email #3
Hello Coach Chris,

I am so sorry that I couldn't wasn’t able to participate this season. (“Couldn’t” implies that the action was possible, but the writer chose not to carry it out for unstated reasons. “Wasn’t about to” specifies that the writer was prevented from carrying out the action by uncontrollable external factors.)

Unfortunately, my back is not quite recovered yet. I spoke with my doctor yesterday, and she recommended that I rest my back for the rest of the season. So, (Don’t use a comma after “so” at the beginning of a sentence.) I just wanted to let you know I can't make it to the games this weekend and probably can't make it to the tournament on in June. (The tournament takes place “in,” not “on” the month.)

I had a great time in at the several* practices (The writer enjoyed herself “at” the practices.) I attended (In this context, “several” implies “many,” so it is better to reference the practices “she attended,” making the description more specific.). I was taught learned a lot of helpful tricks and techniques by you. (Avoid using the passive voice in casual contexts.) I hope that I can come back to the league in the future.

Thank you so much for your** understanding and your support for me. (Use parallel structure to make the sentence smoother: thank you so much for “your understanding” [noun] and “your support” [noun].)

Warmly,
Jillian

*In this situation, it is advisable not to write “at the few practices I attended,” because the word few suggests that the writer did not attend very many practices. The writer’s goal is to state that she enjoyed the practices that she attended, not to emphasize that she only attended a few practices.
**Without the “your,” “understanding” by itself is a verb in this context.

Questions (Yes or no)
Working Definition
·         Tricky “yes or no” questions: questions that are posed in the negative form, and require the listener to agree or disagree
o   Wouldn’t you like something to eat? -> Would you not like something to eat?
§  Response, Korean-style: Yes, I don’t want anything to eat now.
§  Response, English-style: No, I don’t want anything to eat now.
·         In Korean, the audience responds to such questions in the context of the question. The writer asks specifically if you would NOT like to eat something. If you are hungry and want to eat something, the correct answer is no, and if you aren’t in the mood for a snack, the correct answer is clearly yes.
·         However, in English, the audience responds to a universal system in which “yes” corresponds with situations in which a person has taken an action or does possess a quality or desire referenced in the question. By the same logic, “no” corresponds with situations in which a person has not taken an action or does not possess a quality or desire referenced in the question

Common examples
·         Isn’t the summer camp very expensive? -> Is the summer camp not very expensive?
o   Yes, it is incredibly expensive.
o   No, the cost is not that high.
·         Wouldn’t you like to sign up for extra college-level courses this fall? -> Would you not like to sign up for extra college-level courses?
o   Yes, I would like to sign up for more courses and challenge myself with a rigorous schedule.
o   No, I already have a very difficult schedule and do not wish to take extra courses.
·         Don’t you miss me? -> Do you not miss me?
o   Yes, I miss you a lot!
o   No, I don’t miss you.
·         Can’t you stay a little longer? -> Can you not stay a little longer?
o   Yes, I can stay for a few more minutes.
o   No, unfortunately, my parents are expecting me home by dinnertime.
·         Are you not interested in continuing your subscription with this magazine?
o   Yes, I would like to continue my subscription.
o   No, I am not interested in continuing my subscription. Please remove me from your list.

Compound words
Working definitions
·         Linked word (closed form): a compound word formed by connecting two different words without a space or hyphen (Linked compound words are typically nouns, verbs, or adjectives)
o   A greenhouse, to overthrow,
·         Hyphenated word: a word formed by connecting two or more words with a hyphen (Hyphenated compound words are typically nouns or adjectives)
o   A merry-go-round, 500-page novel
·         Separated words (open form): a word formed by connecting two different words with a space (Separated compound words are typically nouns, verbs, adverbs or adjectives)
o   The swimming pool, highly paid lawyer
Using hyphens
·         When a compound phrase has more than one potential meaning, use a hyphen in order to clarify the meaning.
o   My favorite movie was the one about the ancient-history teacher. (With the hyphen, the writer clarifies that he is referring to a teacher of ancient history, not a really old history teacher.)
·         When a compound word description is used before a noun, use a hyphen. When the description comes after a noun, however, don’t use a hyphen.
§  The visiting scholar’s lecture was well thought out and insightful. The well-thought-out plan involved many elaborate details, including a radio, some hard hats, and a late night scavenger hunt.
o   When a compound word description involves an adverb (often words that end in –ly), don’t use a hyphen.
§  Members of the publishing industry sang praises for the recently published book, the first published by the young author.
o   When talking about one’s age, use hyphens if the age is mentioned before a noun but no hyphen if the age comes after a noun.
§  While searching for information about the Cold War, I uncovered a seventy-one-year-old manuscript of Winston Churchill’s speech about the “Iron Curtain.”
§  My younger sister is ten years old.
·         When compound words or phrases are formed by adding a prefix (anti, pre, post, re, non), don’t use a hyphen.
§  Although I scored poorly on the pretest that we took in class, I passed the actual high school exit exam with flying colors.
§  My friends decided to go to the mall yesterday and encountered a rowdy antiwar protest.
o   NOTE: The prefixes “ex,” “all,” and “self” are always written with a hyphen.
§  Today’s philosophy lesson focused on the principle of self-respect and integrity.
o   However, if the main word in the compound phrase is capitalized, use a hyphen.
§  In order to inspire us to become interested in the pre-Colombian trade, my teacher organized various simulations where different students represented Native Americans, African tribes, and European traders.
§  Non-German minorities living in Europe in the early 1940s suffered high casualties due to the war.
o   If the prefix is attached to a number (e.g. a year, decade, or century), use a hyphen.
§  Post-1648, the European region began to gravitate into a system of nation-states, shaped by the Peace of Westphalia.
o   If a vowel is repeated at the end of the prefix and the beginning of the main word, use a hyphen to avoid confusion.
§  In 2012, President Obama was successfully re-elected as the US president.
o   If more than one prefix is used, use hyphens to separate them.
§  American women in the mid-to-late 19th century accomplished some advancement in the movement for gender equality. (Refer to the above grammar rules to determine whether or not a hyphen should be used between the last prefix and the main word. In the above sentence, no hyphen is used as the main word starts with a number.)
·         When writing out numbers as words, use a hyphen only for numbers between twenty-one and ninety-nine
o   We have forty-eight hours before we need to present our paper in front of the panel of judges.
o   One hundred twenty-five people attended the rally in California, to boost support for presidential candidate Hillary Clinton.
·         Check the chart below for common compound words and expressions.
Linked Compound Words
Hyphenated Compound Words
Separated Compound Words
A policeman
Her boyfriend
The software
To send an email
Playing baseball
To host a fundraiser
To say goodbye
Newborn baby
The dangerous earthquake
In my lifetime
The approaching deadline
Anti-abortion, pro-life
Great-grandfather (great-great-aunt)
My mother-in-law
To double-click

High school students
Public speaking
Decision making

Punctuation
The Comma
Working definition
·         A grammatical symbol used to indicate separation of ideas or a pause in the sentence flow
When to use commas:
·         In a compound sentence with two distinct ideas joined by a transition word (for, and, nor, but, or yet, so), use a comma if both clauses have a distinct subject and each expresses a complete thought.
o   I am looking for an entry-level summer job, and I am interested in working at a youth science camp. (Both the first and second clause have a distinct subject, “I”, and each clause, by itself, can be a simple sentence.)
o   The student was exhausted but was determined to put the finishing touches on her art portfolio before going to bed. (No distinct subject is stated in the second clause, so a comma should not be used.)
·         In a complex sentence with an additional clause(s) that provides more information about the main clause, use a comma to separate the different clauses.
o   Check the chart below for common connector words (subordinate conjunctions) that begin additional clauses.
After
Although
As [if]
As long as
As much as
As soon as
As though
Because
Before
Even if
Even though
How
If
In order to
Lest
Now that
Provided (that)
Since
So that
Than
Though
Unless
Until
When / whenever
Where / wherever
While


o   As soon as you fill out the form, please send me the signed copy. (The additional clause, beginning with the connector word “as soon as,” comes before the main clause, so a comma is necessary to separate the two clauses.)
o   It is better to listen carefully to the professor’s directions lest you receive a bad grade in the course. (The additional clause which begins with the connector word “lest” comes after the main clause, so a comma is not necessary.)
·         In a list of three or more nouns, adjectives, adverbs, or verbs, use commas between each phrase in the list. Note that the comma after the second to last phrase is optional.
o   Over the summer, I plan to sleep a lot, eat good food[,] and read several classic books.
o   My lovable, generous, and sympathetic friend agreed to help me study for my final exams. (In a list of adjectives, do not use a comma to separate the last adjective from the word being described.)
o   NOTE: For particularly long lists where the phrases themselves include commas, use semicolons (;) to separate each object.
§  Please examine the following list of tasks prior to the start of the school year: register for student clubs, summer courses, and an eating plan; submit your social security number and health insurance provider to the health office; and visit local libraries, museums, and eateries to familiarize yourself with the town.
·         In a sentence with a short phrase that provides extra information about a noun, use commas to isolate the phrase from the rest of the sentence. The sentence should express a complete thought even without the extra phrase.
o   Once you arrive on campus, look for Mr. Scott, the teacher in the brown coat, as he will guide you to your first class.
o   Could you help me find a magazine that was printed in the early 20th century? (Do not use commas to separate clauses that begin with “that.”)
·         When referencing a specific date (month, day and year) in the body of an email, use a comma after the day and the year to preserve sentence fluidity.
o   I graduated from a local community college on May 17, 2014, and immediately began to study at the Massachusetts Institute of Technology.

Double and Single Quotation Marks
Working Definitions
·         Double quotation marks (“quote”): A grammatical symbol used to distinguish a word or phrase from the rest of the sentence, to reference dialogue or the title of a work, or to use a word in a non-traditional way
·         Single quotation marks (‘quote’): A grammatical symbol used very rarely in English grammar
When to use double and single quotation marks:
·         When referencing material that was directly stated by another person, use double quotation marks around the quoted statement.
o   On the official competition website, it says, “Children of Google employees are ineligible to enter or participate in the Contest.”
§  NOTE: All commas or periods that come at the end of the quotation should be written inside the quotation marks. Exclamation and question marks should be written inside the quotation marks only if the referenced statement itself is an exclamation or question.
o   The principal said that it was the “proudest moment of [his] life when one of [his] students shouted, ‘I won the Obama Presidential Service Award!’”
§  NOTE: When the person speaking in the quoted material refers to something said by a different speaker, use single quotes to distinguish what is said by the second speaker.
·         When referring to the titles of major works (books, movies, music albums, plays), use italics. When referring to the titles of smaller works within the major ones (book chapters, individual songs, individual acts in a play), use double quotation marks.
o   While watching the Broadway musical, Hamilton, I was moved by the song “History has its Eyes on You.”
§  NOTE:  Unlike in Korean grammar, it is very rare to use the double angle brackets (<<quote>>) to introduce quoted material.
·         When referring to a word or phrase sarcastically or ironically to cast doubt on the meaning of the word as used in the sentence, place the word or phrase within double quotation marks.
o   The girl said that she was my “friend” as she tried to cheat off of my exam paper.
§  NOTE: In order to emphasize a particular word, underline or italicize it instead of using quotation marks.
·         When introducing words without referring to the meaning of the words themselves, use the double quotation marks.
o   As he is still learning how to read and write in English, my younger brother often uses the word “witch” instead of “which.” (The writer refers to the words “witch” and “which” and the manner in which his younger brother uses them, not the real meaning of the two words themselves.)
o   NOTE: Italicize all foreign words in a sentence.
§  Anneonghaseyeo is the appropriate way to greet someone in Korean.

Em-dash
Working definition
·         A grammatical symbol  (— or --) used to indicate a pause that can replace a comma, colon, or parentheses
When to use em-dashes
·         Em-dashes can be written in place of commas to place more emphasis on the enclosed text. In this context, em-dashes always come in pairs.
Comma
Em-dash
I would like to buy a new laptop, preferably one that costs less than $1,000, before the start of the school year.
I would like to buy a new laptop—preferably one that costs less than $1,000—before the start of the school year.

·         Em-dashes can be written in place of parentheses to place more emphasis on the enclosed text in a slightly less formal manner. One or two em-dashes can be used, depending on the context.
Parentheses
Em-dash
Through my science research, I discovered that many of the supermarket’s brands (over 50 of them) were contaminated with potentially harmful chemicals.

In the past, many people predicted that the end of the world would arrive at the beginning of the 21st century (January 1, 2000).
Through my science research, I discovered that many of the supermarket’s brands—over 50 of them—were contaminated with potentially harmful chemicals.

In the past, many people predicted that the end of the world would arrive at the beginning of the 21st century—January 1, 2000. (When the phrase in parentheses is placed at the end of a sentence, only one em-dash is needed.

·         Em-dashes can be written in place of colons to emphasize the conclusion of a clause in a slightly less formal manner. Only one em-dash is necessary in this context.
Colon
Em-dash
After eight long months of preparation and planning, my family finally moved to the US: a country with new food, language, and customs.
After eight long months of preparation and planning, my family finally moved to the US— a country with new food, language, and customs.

·         NOTE: Em-dashes can be written either with one space on either side of the dash, or no spaces.
·         NOTE: For compound words or phrases, be sure to use the shorter hyphen (-), rather than the long em-dash.

Sample Email #4
Dear Emily,

I would like to invite you to our all-school Cultural Fair next month. (“All-school” is a linked compound word.) There will be traditional dance performances, music, and food from Korea, China, France, and the Philippines—*vegetarian and vegan options will be available as well. Doesn’t Iit sounds like fun? (With the phrase “doesn’t it,” use the plural form of the following verb.)
For your information, I have attached the festival schedule. If your parents are okayIf it’s okay with your parents, you’re welcome to come to my house around 5, so we can go to the event by 6. (“If your parents are okay” addresses the parents’ well-being and health. “If it’s okay with your parents” addresses the parents’ approval of a particular situation.)

My last day of school will be is** May 21st. Let’s try to meet up again once summer hits!

Have a wonderful day!

Cheers,

*Either parentheses or an em-dash is appropriate in this sentence, as the writer includes extra information at the end of the main clause.
** Because this sentence states a clear fact about the date of a particular event, it is simpler and more concise to say “my last day of school is May 21st.”